Haiku 14

Haiku

Against the backdrop

Of a tree-covered slope

Sailboats pass by

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by Lori Lipsky

6 thoughts on “Haiku 14”

Anita Klumpers on August 13, 2012 at 9:09 am said:

The quiet elegant syllable sounds of the last line paint a perfect picture of the sailboats slipping through the water. Makes me want to go to a lovely lake and take a photo of a sailboat passing by a tree-covered slope.
Robin Steinweg on August 13, 2012 at 9:16 am said:

I enjoy the mini-vacations I often get when I visit the Patio. Thanks, Lori!
Joanie on August 13, 2012 at 10:39 pm said:

I’m there, Lori!
Holly Michael on August 14, 2012 at 2:46 pm said:

Hi Lori, I gave you an award from my blog today. http://www.writingstraight.com
- Lori Lipsky on August 14, 2012 at 6:50 pm said:
  
  Thank you, Holly. I love your blog. I’m thankful for this award.
poetjena on October 9, 2012 at 6:14 am said:

The beautiful and elegant symmetry of this Haiku is a pleasure to read Lori.

Do you know I love patios, so always glad to visit your blog, and thankful that you pass by mine!

love & appreciation

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