6 thoughts on “Haiku 14

  1. The quiet elegant syllable sounds of the last line paint a perfect picture of the sailboats slipping through the water. Makes me want to go to a lovely lake and take a photo of a sailboat passing by a tree-covered slope.

  2. The beautiful and elegant symmetry of this Haiku is a pleasure to read Lori.

    Do you know I love patios, so always glad to visit your blog, and thankful that you pass by mine!

    love & appreciation

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